The Spiral
From Writing Poetry (Boston: The Writer, Inc., 1960) 47-50
Finally, here is a shortened version from my notebook of the making of a poem. In a friend's house I was shown a collection of hundreds of varieties of one kind of sea-shell; and an album of all the varieties of sea-weed from one (Irish) coastline; and briefly some enlarged photographs of a sea-shell cut across to show the spiralling outward growth. I carried the sound of the first line and a half in my head till I got home. The drafts, or gropings, are printed first; the completed or acceptable stanzas follow:
I. DRAFT
The infinite orderliness of the natural worldIs past all wonder. Only the ignorant wonder
And marvel, seeing the never-repeated curled
And colored and faithful patterns out of the
Seeing the never-repeated colored and curled
Seeing the colored and never-repeated curled
Slow growth of sea-shells. But find the founder
Only I ignorant
wonder
COMPLETED STANZA
The infinite orderliness of the natural world
Is past all wonder. Only I ignorant wonder
At the common and colored and never-repeated curled
Slow growth of shells above the sea and under.
II. DRAFT
Seaweed is a green jungle of scum an inch wide
A scum of seaweed is a jungle a green inch wide,
A lifetime long, an age, if naming, caring
Maps it upon one page where spread and dried
A man's lifetime long for seeing, naming, caring
To map it on one page where spread and dried
To map it on one page. Spread there and dried
It is one pattern for the mind's comparing
With mind
With Mind
COMPLETED STANZA
A scum of seaweed is a jungle a green inch wide,
A man's lifetime long for seeing, naming, caring
To map it on one page. Spread there and dried,
It is one pattern for the mind's comparing
III. DRAFT
With Mind that remembers everything It made.
The government of water, like the art of teaching
humility
no pronoun ------- microscope
birds
reaching searching arching marching
the government of water
greater
great calm of knowing law obeyed
Caverns of almost nothing, and heavens, discover
Alike a little of the great calm of law obeyed
As sun casts the year's same shadow over and over.
mover over
sever forever
cover
COMPLETED STANZA
With Mind that remembers everything It made.
Caverns of almost nothing, and heavens, discover
Alike a little of the great calm of law obeyed.
Sun casts the year's same shadow over and over.
IV. DRAFT
Out of shadow I, but no longer saying I,
Move myself from my self in an opening spiral
Toward what I speak of without knowing why
Toward what this poem speaks of, not
Toward what these words hope
Out slowly, outward, and must but may never die
To complete one cell of
The Spiral
title it
COMPLETED STANZA
Out of shadow I, but no longer saying I,
Move myself from my self in an opening spiral,
Drawn toward the light in understanding why
One cell may be one cell yet see the spiral
V. DRAFT
Whole, after slow accretion shaped the whole.
Whole, and what accretion shaped the whole,
But there is more, a world in a tall fountain's
One waterdrop, and more, the fire in coal
more, fire in a crumb of coal,
COMPLETED STANZA
Whole, and what slow accretion shaped the whole.
But there is more, a world in a tall fountain's
One waterdrop, more, fire in a crumb of coal,
And more worlds in the grains that make mountains.